From the past, teacher has plays the important role in upgrading children mentally and physically. Although in the digital era, internet has submissive the impact of teacher, but still, teacher are considered important guardian to student. As far as i m concerned, teacher's ability to relate with student are more essential than the subject of excellent knowledge.
At first blush, teachers have vital role in the society and to the student in uplifting their's confidence and self-knowledge. Being a teacher is not an easy task as it requires co-ordinations and good harmony with students. They have helped student not just in studying new topics but also in their personal life. Teacher's guardian will provide student to choose right path in life. For an instance, When I was in my primary school, I had small fight with my classmate. She criticized me in my way of talking as I was poor in pronunciations. I was upset and my teacher came to me and narrate a small story. I still remember his words and the lesson that I got from that story. In this way, my teacher helped me to ignore the things which are secondary and encourage me to focus on my weakness. Therefore, teacher are crucial in student's life.
Admittedly, teacher's profession is an artistic work. Teacher applies various mechanism to elucidate the topic of study to student. He should be proactive, humorous and talented. For example, My biology professor was great in teaching. He used many proverbs and punchline to make student attentive and refresh, thereby presenting live animals in class. Hence, teacher should be creative and hardworking in making student understandable.
In addition, teacher must have a good communicating skills. There are different students with distinct level of intelligence, and various way of understanding the things. As they are all well-experienced and have years of realization how to deal with students. Teacher must behave sincerely with every students. Some may be poor whereas some are disable, but teacher should not be prejudiced to any students. Moreover, tutor must behave in a healthy manner to all student to make them realized their weakness and ability in certain fields. Thus, teacher should have the quality to cheer and encourage them.
In conclusion, teacher has to maintain their role effectively to enrich student's ability. However, they also have to be self-made in order to convince student about the positive aspects of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: to right
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...sincerely with every students. Some may be poor whereas some are disable, but teac...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disabled'.
Suggestion: disabled
...ents. Some may be poor whereas some are disable, but teacher should not be prejudiced t...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy manner" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13965087282 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89810754963 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533665835411 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5966422232 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6071428571 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3214285714 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24056457102 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693634286538 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685500625544 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146729263232 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708935065939 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.