In the reading, the author claims that dinosaurs were endotherms and by pointing out three reasons of support. However, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer repudiates the claim and presents some evidence on the contrary.
At first, the author argues that dinosaur fossils were found in Polar Regions where maintaining body temperature is necessary to be active in such cold. The professor refutes the point by saying that the areas, where the fossils were found, were warmer during that time. Moreover, dinosaurs could have migrated or hibernated to get rid of the cold.
In addition, the article posits that the leg position of dinosaur is similar to modern endotherms which can run efficiently using its legs. However, the professor says that the legs might have positioned in that way to support the huge weight of dinosaur and it has nothing to do with endothermy. So, he thinks that endothermy of dinosaur cannot be inferred from leg placement.
Finally, the author asserts that Haversian canal in dinosaur bones clear indicate its' endothermy. The author opposes this point by explaining that dinosaurs have growth ring which stops growth or make the growth slower in cold climates. He also states that endotherms grow rapidly in any condition. As the dinosaurs show rapid growth sometimes and no growth sometimes, according to the professor, it can not be endotherms.
- TPO-02 - Integrated Writing TaskIn many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people 66
- Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is warm or cold. Because dinosaurs wer 81
- TPO-41 - Integrated Writing TaskBurning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmf 90
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to s 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, moreover, so, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 227.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22026431718 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6694872105 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599118942731 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.833798879 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145615682978 0.272083759551 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530176749208 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443919089276 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812187718343 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023514389606 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.