New parents should attend parenting class to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether new parents should be advised to take parenting class in order to help their children to be well-rounded is a heated topic at present. Although some may suggest that these parents take part in this training, I would support that people who just give birth to babies should sign up for the courses related to baby education.
One reason is that from the parenting class the new parents can lean to bring up children well. These new custodians lack the experience of parenting, and they may not know what to do when taking care of their babies. Therefore, joining in the lessons about their children’s education is really a good way to expand their outlook and give them a clear direction in baby cultivation. For example, it is the parenting class that has been guiding what these inexperienced parents should do to help rehabilitate when their babies catch a cold.
Another explanation is that parenting class can help avoid mistakes that new parents may make when cultivating babies. The fresh parents may have learnt some outdated ways of upbringing from their own parents, and therefore they may follow these old rules when training their next generations. However, currently things have changed dramatically and the old-fashioned parenting may lead to problems in current baby education. Ergo new fathers and mothers should participate in parenting class before teaching their newborn babies.
In conclusion, as the new parents fall short of relevant experience and may also be misled by obsolete parenting, they ought to take as many parenting classes as possible so that they can perform well in educating their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether new parents should be advised to take p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, really, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11895910781 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72661311762 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1872290538 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.181818182 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428230338364 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196979521722 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110109070281 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289157719649 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785530921882 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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