Yes ,it is true that food has becomr easier to prepare. There are many reasons to explain this
first,internet provide us many quick recipies about different kind of foods and traditional foods .
secondly ,there are many readymade things availible in market like boiled vegetables,boiled rice and many other things.Thats why i am agrer
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: aschocolate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
Yes ,it is true that food has becomr easier t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... There are many reasons to explain this first,internet provide us many quick rec...
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Suggestion: , internet
...are many reasons to explain this first,internet provide us many quick recipies about di...
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Suggestion: .
...rent kind of foods and traditional foods . secondly ,there are many readymade th...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...kind of foods and traditional foods . secondly ,there are many readymade things availi...
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Suggestion: ,
...foods and traditional foods . secondly ,there are many readymade things availibl...
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Suggestion: , boiled
...ailible in market like boiled vegetables,boiled rice and many other things.Thats why i ...
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Suggestion: Thats
...ables,boiled rice and many other things.Thats why i am agrer
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Suggestion: That's
...ables,boiled rice and many other things.Thats why i am agrer
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed rice and many other things.Thats why i am agrer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 30.3222958057 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 285.0 1373.03311258 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 53.0 270.72406181 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37735849057 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.69816787641 4.04702891845 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1586426388 2.5805825403 122% => OK
Unique words: 47.0 145.348785872 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.88679245283 0.540411800872 164% => OK
syllable_count: 90.0 419.366225166 21% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8357739838 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06452816374 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119541624033 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921256014263 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673357459864 0.0662205650399 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956496886299 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920225041574 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 63.6247240618 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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