In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
There are growing number of people in few nations, where isolation is preferred than in the previous time. This essay supports the aforementioned statement because it helps the country's economy to boost and there will be less sharing conflicts between masses.
Primary benefit of separate accommodation of younger generation is that it makes the country more stalwart in terms of finances. Dwellers, who are accommodating themselves, pay separate bills and does not share with anybody, which means more money for the government. Furthermore, they go out more to fulfill the gap in their lonely life and spend huge amount of money on the enjoyment that means more tax for the country. For example, recent survey found that 11% of contribution in the America's economy has been made by masses who are living in the single apartment, as they are spending millions of dollars every single year just to alleviate their loneliness.
The second main boon is that dwellers do not need to deal with the sharing problems that are more commonly inculcate in the sharing accommodation. People have to deal with privacy threat if they are staying with someone and because of this, they might fight a lot. Moreover, there will be less stress on folk's mind and there health will not deprive further, as they are not staying with the joint family. To exemplify this, 11% of the cases in the Indian Judiciary System is related to the people, who are staying in the extended family.
In conclusion, living separately is fruitful for both individual and for nation, as it helps in the progression of country's Gross Domestic Product and there are less folks that are facing anxiety problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99642857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60521210308 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.0804352413 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.181818182 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100568720571 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388629821701 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206096905435 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563489479084 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180005125126 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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