The table demonstrates the number of mobile phones sold in millions from 2006 to 2012.
The first key feature shows that in 2006 Nokia sold the most mobile phones overall. However, in 2012, the last year showed in the table, Samsung became the company which sold the most, from 117 in 2006 to 396.5, while Nokia dropped to second place, from 345 in 2006 to 335.
On the other hand, from 2007 on, the year Apple joined the market, the number of Apple and Samsung significantly rose from 2.3 and 154 to 135.8 and 396.5 in 2012 respectively. Conversely, Ericsson and Motorola both experienced noticeable fall from 102 and 165 in 2007 to 28 and 28 in 2012.
Overall, with the exception of Nokia, there are two clear trends visible. While Apple and Samsung constantly sold more and more mobile phones from 2006 to 2012, the number of Ericsson and Motorola generally went down every year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... 2007 to 28 and 28 in 2012. Overall, with the exception of Nokia, there are two clear trends visib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2785193065 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0282840447 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132683864096 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848145418449 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920664208498 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118756146594 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092909647893 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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