The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools How far do you agree with this prediction

In todays life, there are so many tools we could use to study. Including in it the traditional ways like reading books and the newer one like using the internet.

Internet is a very accessible tool and it delivers so much information. People just need to type keywords in search engine website, then informations from all over the world would be displayed. Given this reason, many people chose the internet rather than books. There is an argument stating that when using books, its kind of hard to find what they look for because they have to open page per page.

I strongly believe that later the internet will replace books in school. These are supported by few factors. First, the internet is much easier to use. Second, internet contains much more information than books. And third, internet can descrease the use of paper significantly.

To sum up, internet could replace books in school eventhough there are who believe that its difficult to happen.

Votes
Average: 6.8 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, then, third, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93251533742 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46094106915 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1149418432 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133693538323 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537668989223 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542440026037 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867642967471 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327900479772 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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