The family is the most important element of a life. They are the people we spend the vast of our time, however, owing to busy schedules and new eating trends, the tradition of a family having a meal together vanishing. This phenomenon follows with several consequences to individuals as well as the community.
In the contemporary world, people are more productive, however, their schedule is busier than ever before. As a result, people spend more time at work, coming home very late while the rest of the family is already sleeping or busy with their own schedules. Another reason, why families are not able to sit behind the one table and eat together might be new trends in eating or lifestyle. Nowadays, intermittent fasting becomes very popular, therefore, adjusting the time of each member of the family to enjoy meals together is almost impossible. In addition to this, different diets require several different ways of preparation and might not be able to be prepared at one time.
For decades, having breakfast, lunch or dinner was the only how to bound with another family members. With disappearing of this routine, members of such families losing connection to each other and in many cases seeing each other just briefly. As a result of this, family members are not aware of what is happening with their mum, dad or brother. This separation might severely affect individuals, while they are depressed and have no chance to share their feelings with the closest ones. Undoubtedly, several cases of depression lead to drug usage, alcoholism, or last but not least to suicide.
In short, owing to a busy schedule and different diets, families have fewer opportunities to have a meal together. This negative phenomenon has not only a significant impact on individuals well-being but also on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...dition to this, different diets require several different ways of preparation and might not be ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in short, as a result, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03986710963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73041196556 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8046292576 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226311534813 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747314652351 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456436379955 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148094481797 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351762151458 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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