The charts below show the results of a survey about what men and women say makes them most happy.
The pie charts reveal the percentage about what could make males and females are most happy. There are six different things show in the charts to make them happy.
Generally, women tend to be happy by doing activity with family by 37%. On the other hand, man have different achievement to be happy which are achievement at work and other factors with same percentage for both figures by 25%.
For women, financial security contributes 12% while for men distributes 15%. Women also give priority to get achievement at work with percentage the same as men which is 25%.
Interestingly, there are some achievements those are only the priority for women or vice versa. Women give priority to be good apperance for 11% while men choose to do their hobbies and successful sports team for 17% and 18% respectively.
To sum up, men and women have different priority in the terms of what could make them happy in their social life.
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man have different achievement to be happy which are achievement at work
men have different achievement to be happy with the achievements at work
what could make males and females are most happy.
Description: two verbs in one sentence.
Sentence: Women give priority to be good apperance for 11 while men choose to do their hobbies and successful sports team for 17 and 18 respectively.
Error: apperance Suggestion: appearance
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 160 200
No. of Characters: 737 1000
No. of Different Words: 94 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.557 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.606 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.557 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 36 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.35 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.426 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.768 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4