using plastic bags is beneficial in many ways
In The author of the reading part and in the lecturer is discussed are discussing the idea of switching from using plastic bags to usage reusable bags. They both agree with this idea, because of huge environmental problems caused by using plastic bags.
In the reading part, the first advantage mentioned is the fact that the usage of reusable bags will reduce the number of plastic bags thrown in a garbage. That is because reusable bags can be used many times which will cause a decline in the waste of plastic bags. The lecturer agrees with this point and feels happy that in many countries, the grocery stores encourage their cuostoumers to bring their own reusable bags.
Furthermore, this shift will save a huge amount of money for the stores, because they do not have not to pay for plastic bags that much ? anymore?. About this reason the author and the lecturer agree that this change in the future can cause the price to decrease in the stores, because of the decline of their expeanses.
Another advantage of this kind of shift mentioned by the author is the petroleum saving petroleum . Since Thus, the plastic bags are made from petroleum and gases, this shift will decrease the waste of such limited resources. Moreover, the lecturer agrees with this reason and mentions that this step will save billions of barrels of petroleum and billions of dollars which are wasted to make plastic bags.
All in all, the author and the lecturer agree with the shift from using plastic bags to using reusable bags. That is why, this change will keep the environment clean and will prevent the waste of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the reading part and in the lecturer is discussed are discussing the idea of ...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'garbage'.
Suggestion: garbage
...ce the number of plastic bags thrown in a garbage. That is because reusable bags can be u...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anymore
...not to pay for plastic bags that much ? anymore?. About this reason the author and the ...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...author is the petroleum saving petroleum . Since Thus, the plastic bags are made f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79928315412 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28210182813 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412186379928 0.540411800872 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6922124549 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06452816374 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226466843872 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109434532851 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091787811838 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155167398807 0.162205337803 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739317313075 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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