The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
what effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? what can be done now to deal with this situation?
Aged people is likely to constitute a more significant part of population of most developed countries in the near future as a result of decrease in their related birth rates. This issue will definetly affect these countries in many terms.
An aged population means that there is less people to work and help their society to develop. This would put the society under pressure, young people should work harder to compensate the lack of work force which might cause many problems for them mentally and physically and there would be no gurantee that they can succeed.
In addition to this, government and inscurance institutes have to spend more money to pay the aged people's retirement wages and obviously this makes the society economically weaker.Furthermore old people are more likely to become ill which their related expenses should be covered by inscurance and it makes the situation even worse.
To prevent that the huge number of aged population become a crisis, some parameters should be considered by government. I think health care is an essential key point. people should be protected from the deseases and other events that may increase the possibility of disablities in their old ages. so they can be able to work and take part in their society's development for a much longer period.Furthermore if the old people were healthy enough, there would be no need that to be looked after by a young person.
In conclusion we can say there is not much we can do about circumstances of an aged population except for keeping them health as far as possible.
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Thanks for attention but I
Thanks for attention but I think my score would be less considering some grammatical errors which you miss . I wrote this essay a couple of days ago and I noticed these errors when I was typing it.
only those I noticed for
only those I noticed for instance : in sentence "An aged population means that there is less people to work" "is" should be replaced by "are" .
Sentence: This issue will definetly affect these countries in many terms.
Error: definetly Suggestion: definitely
Sentence: This would put the society under pressure, young people should work harder to compensate the lack of work force which might cause many problems for them mentally and physically and there would be no gurantee that they can succeed.
Error: gurantee Suggestion: guarantee
Sentence: In addition to this, government and inscurance institutes have to spend more money to pay the aged people's retirement wages and obviously this makes the society economically weaker.Furthermore old people are more likely to become ill which their related expenses should be covered by inscurance and it makes the situation even worse.
Error: inscurance Suggestion: insurance
Sentence: I think health care is an essential key point. people should be protected from the deseases and other events that may increase the possibility of disablities in their old ages. so they can be able to work and take part in their society's development for a much longer period.Furthermore if the old people were healthy enough, there would be no need that to be looked after by a young person.
Error: disablities Suggestion: disabilities
Error: deseases Suggestion: deceases
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Avg. Sentence Length: 33.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.057 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.782 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
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