Many people think that the intelligence is the most important trait of leadership. However, to become a successful and effective leader, a person needs to have other leadership skills. For instance, charisma, communication, conviction and social skills are necessary for leader in order to lead their colleagues. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my disagreement will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, intelligence is a trait for business acumen, political savvy, a deep understanding of social issues and knowledge. Anyone could learn how to make good decisions, analyze data or deal with clients, but intelligence is a personal characteristic, which belongs to the mind, you can not learn it at any school. An intelligence leader is a person who has a good understanding of what needs to be done, and what is going to change. He or she will then make decisions based on their feeling, and using their head.
On the other hand, a clever man has capabilities that make people want to follow him, which is a characteristic of charisma. Moreover, to deal with your clients easily and understand correctly, communication skill is necessary for the leader. And conviction skill plays an important role to help leader persuade their subordinates. lastly, social skills are the trait for leader to know a people feeling, it support them to understand this better and faster than others.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with this viewpoint since it seems to me that the disadvantage of intelligent which is the most vital skill of leadership outweigh the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...elp leader persuade their subordinates. lastly, social skills are the trait for leader...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...for leader to know a people feeling, it support them to understand this better and fast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18939393939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11587510757 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3741075589 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197330167226 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704964980372 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059864865144 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128254052722 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358739154096 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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