Married is a beginning of couple life fro human being so there have some faith about get married before thirty years old is better for yourself and for society. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my agreement will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
In the one hand, delayed marriage may be easy to form a family since they have to preparing for change, in part of financial status, stable work and accommodation. On the contrary, in medical aspects, getting marriage and having a baby at the higher age get more risk than the younger. Some researches revealed that high age mothers have a chance to abortion when they get pregnant. In addition, the fetus may develop in the wrong way in some cases if mothers do not take care under medical treatment.
In the other hand, forming a family when you still young is suitable for this eras. Firstly, mother health will not affect to your baby when pregnant and baby can absorb the rich nutrients from younger mother easier than the older. After childbirth, mother health still wealthy enough for recovery by themselves and have a lot of potential to raise their child. In other words, the gap between parents and children is very short, it means that parent tend to understand what children feel and know how to manage the situation, as well as explicate their relationship closely.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with these viewpoints since it seems to me that the advantage of getting marriage before you are 30 years old outweigh the disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
Married is a beginning of couple life fro human being so there have some faith ab...
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Message: Did you mean 'have to prepare'?
Suggestion: have to prepare
...may be easy to form a family since they have to preparing for change, in part of financial status...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ly when you still young is suitable for this eras. Firstly, mother health will not a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86742424242 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53603223189 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9216360034 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226223602874 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797688887356 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069267807479 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136737854958 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597521994236 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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