In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Does the advantage of this trend outweigh the disadvantage?
In recent days, cities have become best place for people to live because of its facilities and job opportunities. Thus, many local people are interested to move cities resulted in many problems. To solve issues, some people suggest that government should instruct the companies to expand their branches to local region not to always concentrate in cities. In my point of view, this change would greatly benefits to control the over crowd problems of particular region.
Firstly, distribution of the companies in regional places undoubtedly helps in regulation of cost of living. In other words, if more people are populated in a particular area, a lot of demand for products could be happen and this will leads to huge increase in costs of goods and services. For instance, rents for house urban Hyderabad has almost doubled in recent days due its increase residents percentage. Thus, a possible solution to control the living could would be definitely the expanding of infrastructure to various places.
Secondly, even the companies can be benefited when they shifted their building to local areas. This is because, it is not a wise option for a company to establish in already congested areas of city since they have to spend large amount of the their monetary resources. Moreover, the employees gets exhausted and lose interest to workplace with the huge traffic problems which is inevitable in large cities. Therefore, business people has to think whether establishments should be in cities which can effects both resource and productivity or local areas is free from such problems.
To conclude, the government idea of suggesting the companies to less populated other than cities would be great idea as this way of implementation can benefit both the individual who are living in cities and also the for the employer who do not to spend huge money for their infrastructure.
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Suggestion: become the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12987012987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8131500954 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2823468006 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105818576369 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390633228746 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352222356639 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654746905367 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295450848354 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.