Any country can achieve the greatness but greatness is wide and generic term that consists many other parameters which are as important as the welfare. There are many countries in this world where people are receiving good social reforms and welfare but this doesn't mean that only a well dwelled and fed person is capable to make the country in which he is living great. Many scientific advancements also come from the underdeveloped or developing countries which are
meant for the welfare of people.
The claim put forward by the author which states that the welfare of a nation's people is a better indicator for its greatness is not substantial enough. Though welfare of people is necessary for any country to reach the height of greatness but there are many other factors that comes into the picture. Additionally there is no perfect measure find out how great a country is. Many factors work in this way to find how well a country is doing and some of them are: GDP, Per person capita, Population, Poverty line etc.
Another claim that was put forward without a solid foundation was that the achievements of rulers, scientists and artists are not better indicator. Though it is not possible to compare these indicators keeping in mind the objective of measuring greatness of a country, but the achievements of the rulers, artists and scientists in a country do indicate the quality of leadership, creativity and education the people of that country has respectively. And these parameters
also indicate how good education the people are getting that also consists the artistic and leadership aspects in the coursework.
To conclude, we can agree on the fact that the welfare of people is essential aspect for the country to be great but there are many other factors that are significantly important. So only one factor may not be necessarily enough to summarize the greatness of a nation. Science, art and leadership are as important for as the welfare because many scientific advancements are done with an objective of welfare of people. These areas indicate the education level of a nation and the ability of a it's people to grasp these areas accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97252747253 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75767802128 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456043956044 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0225212066 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214890573033 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866833185636 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627940507806 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10815477002 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456130714069 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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