Improvement in economy is considered to have a profound useful impact on individual and community.advantages of strong economy Overshadow disadvantages,consequently aids in prosperity and strengthening of society and at individual level.
It is believe my many that, strong econemy is key factor needed in daily life to progress,good financial state helps in achieving dreams,as an illustration, bank balance of guardian determines admission of a student in private college.Moreover developed countries with no restrictions can raise standard of living of common man by utilizing funds on education, construction and health sector.A clear example is, in KPK,province of Pakistan ,primary education is free to all.furthermore basic facilities such as health is free of cost including primry visit to major surgeries.
Others opine that, economic development causes misuse of resources, ultimately, destruction at mass level.To illustrate,saudi kingdom ,richist of all muslim countries, waste plenty of money on constructing luxurious beaches and resort, instead this money can be used in helping underdeveloped countries to make this world peaceful.It is argued that strong financial state is considered as distraction in achievement of goals.one clear example is ellite class of Pakistan misuse power, recently an incident was reported ,siblings of politician murdered a student in a minor fight over seating arrangement in examination hall effecting life of individual and detrimental effects on family.
To conclude,advantages of economic development are unavoidablein forseable future ,and have paramount effect on human life,at individual level and society.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
- Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03375527426 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80982518398 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675105485232 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.331592033 49.4020404114 452% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 357.5 106.682146367 335% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0574216432534 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356299483294 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306560525522 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356299483294 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306560525522 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.6 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.79 50.2224549098 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.58 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.09 8.58950901804 152% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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