This is a widely acknowledged concept that the true measure of success is primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself. It is easy to lose sight of this and we often get distracted by the amount of things achieved by others or expectations set upon us by society and we being to judge this as a measure of success for ourselves.
From the very beginning we have been subjected to certain expectations and some goals have been set for us. It is expected to get good grades so that we could have an illustrious academic career which would in turn help us to get in a college of our choice. This would help us graduate from a respectable institute and would pave the way for prime job offers. Securing a cushy job at a huge firm would help us take the first step towards a financially secure an independent future. Even before a child could fathom what a financially secure future means, baby steps are taken towards that goal.
However, these conventional set of goals may not be every single person's dream to achieve and to keep up with that goal may lead to an extreme sense of dejection and lead to a broken spirit. It could also happen that the person is successful at achieving all of such goals that have been set for him. To an outsider that may seem as a successful career and a successful life altogether. However, that does not ensure happiness or creative growth or a will to excel on an individual level and the pursuit of true success is lost.
One should hence, set goals for oneself instead of blindly pursuing targets in hopes of achieving them to be successful. For example, if someone is more artsy and is inclined towards pursuing arts but is being pressurized by one's parents to pursue science since that would ensure a more secure and successful career. The choice would lie as to what exactly measures true success - goals that one would set for oneself or the preconceived notions and expectations set by society. By making this choice the person would ensure achieving the goals with more enthusiasm and positivity. By giving a hundred percent of one's effort, true success would only be a matter of time.
The conclusion is that success is subjective and true success can only be measured with respect to the goals one sets for oneself and not one imposed by anyone else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60532687651 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53498934366 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481840193705 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0429471127 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.882352941 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266533024947 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104534449803 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897639561532 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186048671742 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844072135835 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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