Do you agree or disagree: The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her
personality or character.
The way people are wearing clothes in a different situation has always been a controversial issue among society experts. While some people believe that dressing is a sign of your personality, there are others holding the view that your behavior is more important than your clothes. As far as I am concerned, that is better you wear suitable clothes for each situation, but the most important is the way you treat. I will vindicate my standpoint hereunder.
The first point juts out of the mind is the fact that it is better you dress suitable clothes in each situation, but your characteristics are what indicates your personality. An example can illustrate this. Imagine you are in a court with informal clothes. if you speak in the right way and you know about laws, no one doesn’t pay attention to your clothes. this indicates that maybe your clothes keep attention at first of a situation but when people know you in a period of time and start to relate with you, they will forget your dressing.
The second point that is worth considering is the fact that if you wear clothes as always, that means you don’t play a role and don’t show off. some people try to say that they are gentlemen/women just by wearing formal clothes. All we know that is not enough to be a reputable person. Consequently, people that try to absorb respect just by clothes, they may be successful at first, but when others treat with them, they know that is just a show-off.
To make a long story short that is better you wear suitable clothes each situation, but the way you treat with other and be yourself are more important signs of your character. people don’t judge you by your clothes, rather your manner and politeness and behavior with other people are more effective on other people view to you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: This
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...situation but when people know you in a period of time and start to relate with you, they will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76898734177 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64122614495 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3825246517 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196709682759 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729348474093 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487384586368 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137812805529 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446977633411 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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