Do you agree or disagree: It is impossible to always be completely honest with your
friends?
Be honest with others people have always been a controversial issue among social experts. While some people believe that if you want to have a long friendship it is better, to be honest with your friends, there are others holding the view that it is not necessary, to be honest in each situation. As far as I am concerned, long friendships are based on trust each other. I will vindicate my standpoint hereunder.
The first point that juts out of the mind is the fact that, you say someone is your close friend, that means you are comfortable with him/her and you can trust him/her. Therefore, there is no obstacle between your heart and your friend and you can say all in truth. this indicates that, if you feel that you couldn’t say all of the happenings to your friend, you might think about your relationship and why you couldn’t trust him/her.
The second point that is worth considering is that fact that sometimes your honesties might hurt your friend. In this situation that is better for him/her and for your relationship that you do not say whole the truth. I mean sometimes you need to cut some of the details and don’t say everything that happened. An example of my own experiences can give some light to this issue. when I was working at a company a few years ago, one of my friends joins us for a project. after a few weeks, he had a mistake on his duty. my boss asked about his mistake. my friend see me when I was talking with the boss after when we talk finished, my friend asked me “what were you talking about?”. In such a situation that is better, you completely to be honest.
To make a long story short, your friend is a person who you can trust him/her and be honest with him/her. if you cannot be honest, you must check your relationship problems and why you cannot be honest. But sometimes in a special situation that is better for your relationship that you don’t tell the whole of the truth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ur friend and you can say all in truth. this indicates that, if you feel that you co...
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... if you feel that you couldn't say all of the happenings to your friend, you might th...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'mean'.
Suggestion: sometimes mean
... that you do not say whole the truth. I mean sometimes you need to cut some of the details and...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...truth. I mean sometimes you need to cut some of the details and don't say everything t...
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Suggestion: When
...nces can give some light to this issue. when I was working at a company a few years ...
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Suggestion: After
...e of my friends joins us for a project. after a few weeks, he had a mistake on his du...
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Suggestion: My
...ew weeks, he had a mistake on his duty. my boss asked about his mistake. my friend...
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Suggestion: If
...ust him/her and be honest with him/her. if you cannot be honest, you must check yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, i mean, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53541076487 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60539461843 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464589235127 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8685985488 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2631578947 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239352433953 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854180733891 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954124295529 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171201038765 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05555864671 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.