TPO 42-integrated
The passage and the lecture discuss birds cannot distinguish between glass and open air. The author of the passage present three reason to ascertain how it can stop birds get injured. The lecturer believes none of the reasons could strongly give obvious methods that it could be practical.
The author argues that one solution to save birds and they do not harm. The strategy is to replace the regular glass with one-way glass. Therefore glass will be like as a mirror. The lecturer argues against this reason and believes that birds do not understand mirror and they think that reflected picture on the mirror is the real object, like sky or tree, and fly through it. As a result, the usage of a mirror instead of glass does not work.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds a view that paint or colorful glass, like as striped glass, could be a solution and this makes birds be away of them. this indicates that birds would see the stripes and avoid trying to fly through the glasses. Nevertheless, the lecturer illustrates that either we paint glass with distant lines, birds will try to fly through them, or if it was painted with close lines the room get dark. Consequently, this solution cannot be practical and safe life of birds.
Finally, the reading asserts that artificial magnetic field around the building could guide birds away from them. Because birds have an ability like a compass to find direction. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that birds use this ability for long trips and they do not use that for short journey, from the one side of the city to the other side. Accordingly for many of birds movement the solution cannot be much effective. this claim does not possess a strong support in order to be acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tain how it can stop birds get injured. The lecturer believes none of the reasons c...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... methods that it could be practical. The author argues that one solution to save...
^^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ion to save birds and they do not harm. The strategy is to replace the regular glas...
^^^
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e the regular glass with one-way glass. Therefore glass will be like as a mirror. The lec...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...n and this makes birds be away of them. this indicates that birds would see the stri...
^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lding could guide birds away from them. Because birds have an ability like a compass to...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...one side of the city to the other side. Accordingly for many of birds movement the solution...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 439, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... the solution cannot be much effective. this claim does not possess a strong support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79605263158 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33958135742 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0993361007 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523414918353 0.272083759551 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170262229011 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826374756168 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30121389571 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870385124948 0.0443174109184 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.