Essay topics: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to a training course which i have recently seen in an advertisement of technology times and would like to pursue it.
The course is designed for network architects and titled as network sizing and link analysis with a duration of seven days and focuses primarily on designing and link budget for network requirements from customers. The course is followed by an online examination and a certified is awarded at the end of the course.
Thus I request if the company can help to sponsor this course as the cost of course including the online examination is around USD 500 including taxes,I believe this course will help me in gaining expertise and knowledge in designing critical networks for our company and external customers. Our competitors are also getting their resources certified with this course as it helps engineers to design cost efficient networks thus reducing the overall cost and helping the companies to win competitive bids.
I look forward to your response on the above.
Yours sincerely
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...s followed by an online examination and a certified is awarded at the end of the course. ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...is awarded at the end of the course. Thus I request if the company can help to sp...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...nation is around USD 500 including taxes,I believe this course will help me in gai...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse on the above. Yours sincerely vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7551604474 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7645530019 44.8134815571 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233272966688 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109240776207 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468089815472 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133858449478 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481037043026 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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