You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter
- Describe your knowledge of the city.
- Explain what information was incorrect in your opinion.
- Suggest how the editor could fix this error.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to inform you about some incorrect information that you had mention in your article on 10th of April.
At the first, I should thank you for your amazing article. No one can describe our town as you did. However, there is some mistake in your article. First of all, you said one hundred thousand of people currently live in my city, it is not correct. Right now population of my city is more than one million. Secondly, you said Mashhad's climate is most of the time is rainy is the winter, while I think it is just cold without rain or snow. Finally, as I read in your article I think founder of Sajad museum was Ali Saberi not Jahangir Froughi.
I have plenty of information about my city that I am glad to share with you. For the beginning, there are some nice tourist villages around Mashhad with, like Torghabe, Shandiz. Tourists can buy their souvenirs from these places. Moreover, some famous falls like Torogh falls just 30 miles far ways from Mashhad.
I think you should better write a new article and add new information about my city, and at meanwhile correct your mistakes.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
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there is some mistake in your article.
there are some mistakes in your article.
Mashhad's climate is most of the time is rainy is the winter
Mashhad's climate in most of the time is rainy in the winter
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 206 200
No. of Characters: 907 1000
No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.788 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.403 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.787 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.587 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4