The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
the given illustration depikt a city called Garlsdon ,which has about 65000 population,that a new supermarket is desided to run inside. Two specific locations are choosen for this purpose and i'm about to select which has the most potential for money making and capitalizing.
As it is obviuse in this map the s1is situated in the east northern part of the city (the country side) ,that is considerably close to both main road fron the north part and also railway from the south side.the Hindtone city with a population of 10000 is about 12km to this place.
Onthe other hand s2 is located in the towon center(a no traffic zone) and it is not so far from 2 cities,brandsdon and crandsdon,which have approximately 44000 inhabitant together.
In conclusion commencing a supermarket inS1 is not a proofable choise since lack of people how needs to buy staffs from there while the transportation is a noticable fact, whereas s2 is more acceptable inorther to higher rate of population and reachability to urban aeras although there has a disadvantage that poeple can't drive their cars to get to their destination due to trrafice zone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
the given illustration depikt a city called...
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Suggestion: ,
...lustration depikt a city called Garlsdon ,which has about 65000 population,that a ...
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...rlsdon ,which has about 65000 population,that a new supermarket is desided to run ins...
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...rthern part of the city the country side ,that is considerably close to both main ...
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Suggestion: , brandsdon
... zone and it is not so far from 2 cities,brandsdon and crandsdon,which have approximately ...
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Suggestion: , which
...ar from 2 cities,brandsdon and crandsdon,which have approximately 44000 inhabitant tog...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'inhabitant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'inhabitants'.
Suggestion: inhabitants
...randsdon,which have approximately 44000 inhabitant together. In conclusion commencing a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsportation is a noticable fact, whereas s2 is more acceptable inorther to higher...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...gh there has a disadvantage that poeple cant drive their cars to get to their destin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9109947644 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07347234985 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8823783937 43.030603864 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.6 112.824112599 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121754036593 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631663611783 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522312999022 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610983430565 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691534287675 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.2329268293 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.