The private motor vehicle has greatly improved individual freedom of movement; moreover it has become a status symbol. Its use through have impacted negatively on city centers as a whole.
What are some serious problems brought about by private motor vehicle use, how can its use be reduced?
Nowadays there is a tremendous increase in private sector vehicles usage. These individual automobiles ensure personal convenient and at the same time it gives air pollution and traffic problems.
Due to technological innovations and mass production in automobile field most of the people are able to own their vehicle at an affordable price. It also shows their economic level by having a [model and features of automobile] / [type of vehicle and its features]. For instance in my relative family, they strongly believe that, for having an automobile vehicle like a car or bike/four or two wheeler represents financial status of a family. They prefer to own an advanced model vehicle whether they using it or not.
Most of the people in my country/India like to travel in their weekends. They celebrate those days with their family members and friends, for that they feels their own vehicle is more convenient than the public transport system.
Even though private vehicle ensures personal convenient at same time it exists/delivers/produces dangerous gases to the society. The vehicle exhaust creates air, water and soil pollution. In this case we may not leave the outcome and its effects; it spoils the nature and the comfortable environment to the entire mankind.
To avoid pollution and traffic problems from private motor vehicle usage governments implementing innovative solutions like sub-urban trains, metro trains and many technological advancements. By providing comfortable journey in affordable price to the people through public transport system individual vehicles and its dangerous outcomes can be minimize.
Providing basic education and awareness about private vehicle exhausts to the people will develop the realization of dangerous outcomes and motivates them to travel in public transports.
In conclusion, it would to apt to say that, by implementing technological advancements in public transport system and basic education, governments can ensure safe and comfortable journey to the people. It helps to minimize the private vehicle usage in tremendous manner.
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Sentence: They celebrate those days with their family members and friends, for that they feels their own vehicle is more convenient than the public transport system.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and feels
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better to have 5 paragraphs:
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