The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper in Masontown:
“If we want to save money on municipal garbage disposal fees, we need to encourage our residents to recycle more. Late last year, our neighboring town, Hayesworth, passed a law requiring that all households recycle paper and glass, or pay a fine. Since that time, Hayesworth has seen its garbage disposal costs significantly decrease. If we implemented an advertising campaign encouraging our residents to recycle, Masontown would also save money on disposal of its waste.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Although fining the residents into compliance may have some grounding in reality, it should address a few more concerns before it it implemented in the public. Are these communites similar in any way beyond geographic neighboring? Or do the costs of this endeavour pay for themselves or do the fines offset that cost?
First and foremost, there is no reason to believe the neighboring communities with the same actions implemented will have the same results. Every year we see neighboring incredibly democratic communities right next to fiercley republican communities. Although these people live right next to one another, spatial relation does not always translate to a relation in views, beliefs, or in this case, actions. It may have worked in Hayesworth and it may have decreased the costs overall. But Masontown may be fiercly republican and fight taxes on a right of principle. We would need more information to assess if the communites are similar enough in demographics and views to decide if the same solution will result in the same results.
Secondly, we don't know the status of the people in Masontown. It may be that Masontown is an incredibly poor community and the residents could simply not afford another tax. Or that the cost of running both a garbage truck and a recycling truck would be too great to monitarily justify the process entirely. Although the garbage costs are lowered if that savings to the private company or the city passed on to the resident? They are punished for not recycling but where is the money coming from to run that recylcing truck? Do the savings of the garbage offset the costs of recycling? If the fines that are implemnted are used as justification for the extra expense what would be the sollution if everyone got on board with the program and there would be no one to fine? Would the program be self sufficent at that time?
If the communites were incredibly similar, in all ways, it is concievable to believe that the intended solutions would occur. But if not, I think further annalysis should be done to present a more clear picture on how this would acctually effect the community as a whole. The author in this case has a noble pursute and that should be respected; but if the monetary and social costs simply don't justify the means, I simply can't recommend this solution.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Are these communites similar in any way beyond geographic neighboring?
Error: communites Suggestion: communities
Sentence: Or do the costs of this endeavour pay for themselves or do the fines offset that cost?
Error: endeavour Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Every year we see neighboring incredibly democratic communities right next to fiercley republican communities.
Error: fiercley Suggestion: fiercely
Sentence: But Masontown may be fiercly republican and fight taxes on a right of principle.
Error: fiercly Suggestion: fiercely
Sentence: We would need more information to assess if the communites are similar enough in demographics and views to decide if the same solution will result in the same results.
Error: communites Suggestion: communities
Sentence: Or that the cost of running both a garbage truck and a recycling truck would be too great to monitarily justify the process entirely.
Error: monitarily Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: They are punished for not recycling but where is the money coming from to run that recylcing truck?
Error: recylcing Suggestion: recycling
Sentence: If the fines that are implemnted are used as justification for the extra expense what would be the sollution if everyone got on board with the program and there would be no one to fine?
Error: implemnted Suggestion: implemented
Error: sollution Suggestion: solution
Sentence: Would the program be self sufficent at that time?
Error: sufficent Suggestion: sufficient
Sentence: If the communites were incredibly similar, in all ways, it is concievable to believe that the intended solutions would occur.
Error: concievable Suggestion: conceivable
Error: communites Suggestion: communities
Sentence: But if not, I think further annalysis should be done to present a more clear picture on how this would acctually effect the community as a whole.
Error: annalysis Suggestion: analysis
Error: acctually Suggestion: actually
Sentence: The author in this case has a noble pursute and that should be respected; but if the monetary and social costs simply don't justify the means, I simply can't recommend this solution.
Error: pursute Suggestion: pursue
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1898 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.733 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.638 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.433 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...ould address a few more concerns before it it implemented in the public. Are these co...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t in the same results. Secondly, we dont know the status of the people in Masont...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...if the monetary and social costs simply dont justify the means, I simply cant recomm...
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Line 7, column 424, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...simply dont justify the means, I simply cant recommend this solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 399.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86215538847 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69769667531 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501253132832 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.67365269461 358% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8610756099 57.8364921388 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121222232888 0.218282227539 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424927738609 0.0743258471296 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416885099597 0.0701772020484 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658081219791 0.128457276422 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04324193963 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.