Many people wonder whether watching movies or televisions influence people's behavior or not. I believe that watching television and movies do have influence in people's life because we learn from what we see. Since watching television has both advantages and disadvantages, I will address all possible consequences in this essay.
First of all, there are many advantages of watching a television. For instance, my brother watches national geography and discovery channel and he has a lot of knowledge about the habitat of certain type of animal. It has helped him in his classes during the study of animal behavior. Similarly, he now also knows the activities of the animals, their life cycle, and their food chain. The channels provided him so much knowledge that he actively participates on animal protection campaign and influence other to protect them. This has ultimately brought an excellent effect on his character as well. Moreover, he has learned the meaning of friendship, love and struggle. Because of this, his behavior has also changed towards more understanding and caring part.
That being said, there are many disadvantages as well when people watch television. For example, a boy from my sister's class jumped off from the roof because he was influenced by a movie character, 'Superman'. On a related note, with the movies like, 'catch me if you can' the crime rate is also sky rocketing. People, to imitate their favorite artist start to do many crimes without their own consent. Similarly, children can learn vulgar words, lure into smoking, drinking and in some cases even doing drugs. Likewise, due to the action and thriller movies children become violent and can have serious mental issues. In other words, because of the heavy influence of the television people can have a negative influence on their behavior.
Lastly, television broadcasts the shows like cooking program, dancing shows, quiz program, and news telecast which enhances the knowledge. People will be less vague about what is happening in the world. Children can really enjoy the show and gain knowledge at the same time. Evidently it will inflate a person's behavior in positive path.
All in all, with everything taken in consideration, television has a high influence in a person's life that may be positive or negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, likewise, may, moreover, really, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17333333333 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72473313678 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6081983472 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.347826087 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3043478261 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194192242472 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556594564721 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702612314702 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113151945749 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779465322297 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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