to what extent has the internet made our life more convenient?
Internet, the bookmark of 21st century, has effected almost all aspects of human life.
We can make use of internet in almost any field of work. Such as arranging work meeting, having access to updated information especially in science related jobs, calculating and analyzing data, transferring important documents rapidly and so on.
It also effect life on daily basis. it can help us the find out how to do something or where to find stuff. It gives us direction to different places. We can book a flight or hotel or any other reservations via internet. We don't have to spend so much time in banks or stores as it enable us to transfer money easily and buy things online.
Maybe the most obvious effect of internet is on communications, how easily people can stay connected to each other even over long distances.
But what are the downsides of this technology. Yes we could do our jobs easier almost from anywhere but also means that there is no escape. This could put do much pressure on emploees. In addition, connection over internet can be a poor replacement for real life communication and deduce the amount of time people spend with their family and non virtual friends.
Some people may spend most of their time surfing web or playing online games instead of going out or doing something productive.
In general, internet has altered our life styles in so many different levels, either good or possibly bad, doing things without it sounds almost impossible. It has improved our lives in different ways. Personally, I think we could say that invention of internet was a turning point in human history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88086642599 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63636794661 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2201554436 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156660249792 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524733390262 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454401802511 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754644273829 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540388229644 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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