Many people think that international travel will decrease in the future. Do you think this will be a positive or a negative development?
Undoubtedly, travel always is one of the people desire. Before invention of plane and car, traveling to another place took a long time. People had to use train, ship or using horses. Plane gives us a good opportunity to travel to every long destination less than twenty hours. Many individuals believe rate of travelling will be decrease.
In my opinion, If this happen, there will be a lot of negative side effects. First of all, travelling is one of the best source or incoming for every property or country. Travelling is source of tourism industry. Tourism industry has a lot of benefit such as decrease rate of the unemployment in the area. Secondly, when people travel around the world, they have a chance to meet new people, and gain new information about other culture. Finally, there are many jobs that related to travel such as pilot, tour guide and so on. If this decreasing happens someday, it will seem we should expect to see rate of the unemployment increasing.
On the other hand, some people believe this event can help to environment. Travelling is means using more fuel like petrol and gas oil and so on. These fuels are very harmful for our environment, so if we do not travel, we will not use fuel. Moreover, tourists cause a lot of noise and make a lot of garbage. Besides, they sometimes destroy some historical structure. Consequently, a few amounts of tourists mean save these entire building, environment.
To sum up, I believe international travel never decrease, because in future people have more facilities and they will have more income. Besides, I think meaning of traveling will change in future. I mean there will no limitation and boundary.
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