The graph shows how the salaries differ over a ten period year in a defined country. It can be clearly seen that the percent growth in wages was the highest in 1998, and got the lowest in 2002.
According to the graph, the growth rate fluctuated from one year to another. The percent was significantly at the lowest rate in 2002. The percent of growth rate increased from 1993 to 1994 by 2%, then dropped in 1996 (3%). The growth started to increase from 1997 reaching the highest percent (6%), then dropped suddenly in 1999 reaching the lowest percent in 2002 (1%).
To sum up, the percent of growth rate in wages are relatively uniform and changed from 2 to 4%, with rare exceptions in 1998 and 2002.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: carmela6
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to 1994 by 2%, then dropped in 1996 3%. The growth started to increase from 1997 re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 575.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4921875 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27308846118 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 153.0 283.868780488 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0944976915 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1428571429 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117967204949 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707018699929 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996066446242 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103238939861 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922037047049 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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