It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
If a new restaurant may be built in my neighborhood I will definitely support this plan. Restaurant is a place where people come to eat food. Human beings cannot avoid eating food because it is our basic necessity. So, building a restaurant in my neighborhood would bring many advantages to the people living there and from outside. I have a number of reasons in support of my view which are as follows:
With opening up a new restaurant we can taste variety of food that will be available in the restaurant and it will attract other people to our neighborhood and make my neighborhood more popular...
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