training dolphins in the cirus
when asked about dolphins should train to do in the circus, every people have different opinions. some people think that it is harmful to these animals. others hold that trainer will protect them. But for me, I believe animals shouldn't be trained to do in the circus.
Although Sometimes some dolphins are play a trick can make people happy and interesting, this way is unfair for some innocent dolphins. For example , when dolphins be trained during the work time , we can't make sure their safety completely and easier injury them. So that cause the harm of heart. it makes dolphins afraid of people and don't dare communicate with human.
Above of all, we need responsible for the safety of animals, because they are human's friend.
when asked about dolphins should train to do in the circus, every people have different opinions.
when asked about whether dolphins should be trained to do in the circus, every person has different opinions.
Although Sometimes some dolphins are play a trick can make people happy and interesting,
Although Sometimes some dolphins are playing a trick that can make people happy and interesting,
when dolphins be trained during the work time
when dolphins are trained during the work time
we need responsible for
we are responsible for
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