The pie chart show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand. Summarize
The charts are giving us information about online shopping sales for four different retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Overall, travel and film/music had the most proportion of sales in 2003 and 2013, respectively.
Travel sales had dropped sharply since until 2013. Their numbers had reduced from 36% in 2003 to 22% in 2013. Clothes numbers fell down from 24% to 16% from 2003 to 2013 which made them the lowest items sold online in 2013.
Books had less amount of online sale than other items in 2003. The numbers increased slightly from 19% to 22% by 2013 removing them from lowest spot (this spot was filled with clothes in 2013). Film/music ranked third highest between four groups in 2003 and were only 2% above the books which were the least sold retail of 2003. Film/music sale percentage went up dramatically until 2013, making them the most sold items online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the lowest'.
Suggestion: from the lowest
...y from 19% to 22% by 2013 removing them from lowest spot this spot was filled with clothes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78431372549 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16486927488 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0984101058 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160687142251 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858590098151 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13801328985 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150904768683 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1394418053 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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