In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should be required to step down after five years.
In any field people who is in power play a crucial role for the institution. Any institution need to be clever, good decision maker and those who beneficial for the institution. Some of the field need to a step down power after five year like politics. But sometime it very important to need a experience person to handle crucial situation. Therefore, i disagree with the statement leader should require to step down after five year. Because any field need to a intelligent, experience and audacious leader.
First, intelligent people is alway on high demand. Afterall education, reacharce and economy all are mind game. If you have a quick idea than it will help to develop country as fast as possible. If these kind of people in step down after five year than it lose for us.For instance, in any reacherse project take years. there is no limit of time how much it take. If reachar step down their position than it will lose of human resource and money. Step down after five year,it is not worthy in this field.
Second, "Old is gold". Experience person have determination, patience and hardwork and they also saw good and bad situation. They can make quick decision in emergency and handle the situation calmly. For instance, A major economy downturn began in 2008 worldwide,Million of job lost. It is a biggest recession after 1930. In America it is cause by the bad policy. But this recession cover by the Barack obama. Therefore Experience play important role in economy.
Finally in a politics, we need a adacious leader to deal with external and internal affair.For Instance, american former president Barack obama, have war and country development is exacilant. They were handle their position very peacefully. that way he got Nobel peace prize, They deal with economy, external affair and in their time their defence force have biggest win on terrorism to kill osama bin laden.
In conclusion, i strongly oppose that power should Step down after five years. Afterall we choose our leader for own benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97947214076 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67231223011 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0252592494 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3076923077 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1153846154 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317042817956 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801543841303 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118594533933 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172853988775 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135764238026 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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