It is true that ,children in rural area has less resources for study .while some person think that this issue can be solved by providing immense schools and teachers.on the oother hand some think that ,it can be solved by Internet and computers. This essay will intend both views .
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Thien
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 232.0 1615.20841683 14% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 49.0 315.596192385 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73469387755 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.64575131106 4.20363070211 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23392032087 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 176.041082164 23% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.816326530612 0.561755894193 145% => OK
syllable_count: 67.5 506.74238477 13% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.5 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3850705071 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217748014827 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217748014827 0.0667982634062 326% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3850705071 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 78.4519038076 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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