You just returned from your travel. Your friend had lent you a tour guidebook. Write a letter and say
- Why was it helpful for you?
- tell them about your travel
- When will you return this book?
Dear Raveena,
I am writing to thank you for lending me your ‘Lonely Planet’ Travel guidebook to Pondicherry. Pondicherry is a French town and I did manage to visit every single tourist spot. I had a memorable trip!
The travel guide was absolutely useful. From booking a comfortable stay at a boutique hotel to exploring the french riviera, it was worth the time and effort. The maps in the tour book were accurate and made it convenient to reach the most remote destinations. I had the opportunity to visit some of the exquisite restaurants and bars.
Furthermore, I spent time taking meditation classes, which was one of the top recommendations in one of the articles in the book. The spa experience was incredibly delightful and luxurious.
I will be visiting your home next week to share photos and return your book. I have also bought you a small souvenir from my trip. I am sure you will love it.
This much-needed vacation would’ve been impossible if you hadn’t encouraged me to take it. Thanks once again. Give my regards to everyone at home. See you soon.
Warm wishes,
Kathleen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nations. I had the opportunity to visit some of the exquisite restaurants and bars. Fur...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ught you a small souvenir from my trip. I am sure you will love it. This much...
^
Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at home. See you soon. Warm wishes, Kathleen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98412698413 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0096101313 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0590217592 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8125 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337221025856 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851523765359 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817300337089 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162476431792 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959722374564 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.