You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline explain what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear airline staff,

My name is Kyle Pen, I had lost my luggage last week while I was taking airline number AC183 in the Dec,12th from Toronto to Ottawa. I don't know why you guys didn't call me yet. But I am kind of concerning what can be happened to my luggage and where my luggage is.

I had a talk with the ground service agent at the airport to discuss this situation and thought I would be received the luggage by now. However, it didn't show up. The things in the suitcase are clothes, and some gifts for my family such as the belt for my dad, and the bag for my girlfriend. And it also contains some important paperwork for my work, I do need to have thest for my next week meeting.

Please reply me back as soon as possible and do your guy's best to search for the luggage.
Thank you so much for your time and work,
best,
shuai

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear airline staff, my name is shuai Peng, I had lost my lug...
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... the Dec,12th from Toronto to Ottawa. I dont know why you guys didnt call me yet. Bu...
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Suggestion: didn't
...nto to Ottawa. I dont know why you guys didnt call me yet. But I am kind of concernin...
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... to my luggage and where my luggage is. I had a talk with the officer in the air...
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Suggestion: didn't
...eceived the luggage by now. However, it didnt show up. The things in the suitcase ar...
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... to have that for my next week meeting. Please reply me back as soon as possible...
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...Thank you so much for you time and work, best, shuai
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...u so much for you time and work, best, shuai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14102564103 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09052997631 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2810480433 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7777777778 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16055661875 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647363407032 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532380457554 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811863151331 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536805600735 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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