Sports events get the nations together and help alleviate the violence in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
It is true that sports have gained the popularity and fans throughout the world. Some people believe that athletic tournaments can reduce the struggles between different countries while others refute the idea. In my opinion, sports competitions have the potential to get the nations together and I will discuss some aspects which require ongoing.
Undoubtedly, everybody has his/her own sense of nationalism or proud toward the country's sports teams. From psychological points of views, although sports competitions usually arouse their nationalism, it also provides an awareness of rival country's background when people see the competitions on TV. It means that people can be informed about the culture and other specific features of rival athletics as well. It has been proven that viewers deliberately get in touch with other countries leading to the more communications.
Furthermore, the attendance of foreign teams tends to provide a situation where authorizations can meet and talk to each other. As an illustrated case, the Ski competition, which was held in South Korea in January 2018, could act as an opportunity for politicians from North and South Korea to meet. It turned out that this competition started the peaceful conversations between the countries.
Last but not least, in regard to traveling the sports fans in the big tournaments, like AFC CUP football, people can directly interact with local residents. It has been elucidated that the direct relationship between nations causes them to get to getter and prevents from the ethnic biases.
In conclusion, using sports events can bring about benefits to improve the relationship between countries through the political meeting, and travelling the fans to other countries; however, TV shows assimilate people's attitude with different cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in regard to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51071428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96148533816 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6841644905 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127709225763 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478337174719 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397796010754 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721151423342 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325492381128 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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