Education plays an important role in shaping one's mindset. I disagree with the statement that multidisciplinary education is overrated and a career specific education is required in its place as it constricts the students learning in only selected field.
Consider a physics research scientist, one may think that the only education they need is in the field of physics and all others are of no use. On the contrary many of the high skilled jobs require a multidisciplinary role. A physics researcher along with physics need to also be educated in fields that may help his/her own research such as chemistry or maths. And not just ordinary subjects but soft skills such as public speaking, entrepreneurship and business management are some of the key skills required in today's competitive world markets.
One can argue that multidisciplinary subjects like maths, philosophy, music, sports along with the subjects required for a certain career adds a lot of undue pressure on the students to excel in those subjects also. It also increases the course duration due to the inclusion of these subjects which also increases the tution fee that the student has to pay. Thus focusing on specific subjects will lead to reduced number of years required to complete the degree courses as well as reduced cost.
However this is based on the assumption that the student is well aware of the specific career stream he/she wants to pursue. This is not the case for a majority of students and having a multidisciplinary approach will help the students in finding their true interests. In this way multidisciplinay education can give an opportunity to learn a variety of subjects which the students then can then choose a career in.
Thus it can be said that multidisciplinary education has many benefits that outweigh the career specific education .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1059602649 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05420893607 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1357976239 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249851543476 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958792400993 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815273378184 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171496001275 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922642220226 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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