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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this
phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
People want to live longer as they have several dreams to fulfill for themselves and for their families. Technological advancement has to a certain extent helped people realized this dream by providing them with facilities unavailable in the past. Hence it is true that people in general live longer now and there are several reasons behind this as mentioned below.
Access to medical services is easy today. During emergency people have several options to get immediate help. They can contact a global helpline number in urgency so that help is provided from a nearby hospital as early as poss...
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Sentence Length SD: 5.514 7.5
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 2143 1500
No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.139 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.545 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 182 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.514 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.292 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.491 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5