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- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer.What is the cause of this?What could be done to solve this problem? 61
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , income
Over the last-half century,income disparity has skyrocketed incredibly in...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... skyrocketed incredibly in some nations.Although extremely high remunerations are symbol...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ol of economic growth and prosperity of an country,as a whole but on the other han...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...omic growth and prosperity of an country,as a whole but on the other hand,according...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , according
...country,as a whole but on the other hand,according to critics,such inequalities could lead...
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Suggestion: , such
...t on the other hand,according to critics,such inequalities could lead to social unres...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , henceforth
...inequalities could lead to social unrest,henceforth,salaries should be checked and controll...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...alaries should be checked and controlled .To my viewpoint,both the sides need prop...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...aries should be checked and controlled .To my viewpoint,both the sides need proper...
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Suggestion: , both
... checked and controlled .To my viewpoint,both the sides need proper scrutinization be...
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Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...crutinization before farming any opinion . To embark on,Astronomical incomes witn...
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Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Astronomical
...fore farming any opinion . To embark on,Astronomical incomes witness high standards of life ...
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Suggestion: It
...ndards of life in the particular nation.It indicates high revenues and hence count...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...countrys extremely good financial status .Additionally,at professional level,high ...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...untrys extremely good financial status .Additionally,at professional level,high earning exec...
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Suggestion: , at
...mely good financial status .Additionally,at professional level,high earning executi...
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Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , high
...atus .Additionally,at professional level,high earning executives act as inspiration f...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , who
...s act as inspiration for other employees,who get motivated and work hard with full p...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rk hard with full passion and dedication ,which could be absent,if all workers are...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , if
...on and dedication ,which could be absent,if all workers are at same income levels -...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , no
...come levels - which means no competition,no innovation and static economies. In co...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...ation and static economies. In contrast,The concentration of wealth in few hands re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in few hands results in disproportional power to a few individuals and discrimin...
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Suggestion: Fellings
...ndividuals and discrimination of masses.Fellings like being suppressed and monitored may...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
...llustrate. After gauging both the sides,it can be clearly asserted that,income ine...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , income
...he sides,it can be clearly asserted that,income inequalities could have negative impact...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nerverthlessly
...ould have negative impact on the people.Nerverthlessly, such cases are very meagre to observe....
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: So
..., such cases are very meagre to observe.So,in all,this trend should be continued.
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , in
...such cases are very meagre to observe.So,in all,this trend should be continued.
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Suggestion: , this
...ses are very meagre to observe.So,in all,this trend should be continued.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22167487685 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.06618650517 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76354679803 0.561755894193 136% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8153408656 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 315.75 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.75 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140750477671 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732304252068 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444905805195 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732304252068 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444905805195 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 13.0946893788 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.65 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.68 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.57 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 37.0 9.78957915832 378% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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