Currently there is a trend towrds the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Medicine is an essential kind in most society nowadays especially the part of urban life who going to consume natural drugs for health care such as alternative between chemical medicine. Although it is necessary to search factual data about worse effect when it use without recommended by experts or bad side an alchemy drug.
It is being important to drugs consumers now to consume another different way to used natural ingredients for health such as fruits, vegetables or spices for cured from viruses and so on. China, for an example still reverse natural antibiotic to help people who sick and to detoxify poisons from human bodies. So, many modern society believed that natural health care such as bruise, acupuncture, message, is the best choice health system. However, it can be seen so less experts who can handle and have skills for cured people with alternative drug. Afterwards, many results that showed the strength of natural resource is better than another synthetic drug.
In contrary, synthetic drug had a licence and guarantee for people. In hospitals, it can be seen that Doctor always suggested people to eat pills, beside fruits. We can't refuse that hospital regulation had an experts resource and more efficient than other kind of health worker in another places. For example, in United States of America has apply a chemical pharmacy in a large system for hospital to remedies people from viruses. Finally, American people addicted to consume chemical drugs and considered to antibiotic.
To conclude, although the major of citizen in the world choose to go to the hospital, people can't deny that natural drug more save than chemical. So, public should take good care of their bodies and give a better choice to use environment friendly medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun experts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...alth system. However, it can be seen so less experts who can handle and have skills ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: experts'; expert's
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Suggestion: applied
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to use environment friendly medicine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, still, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52453624713 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 290.88556701 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.4276274249 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559486247178 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209152868794 0.0766984524023 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262660010645 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364856299639 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171999125239 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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