Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Currently it is trusted that a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine.However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.in this essay i completly agree with this pronouncemant if some alternatif medicines have bad iffect for some reasons.
This is good for our healthy the costs are needed low enough and cheaper than conventional treatment. It is because alternative medication use natural remedies and natural tool while doing therapy. More Different than medical treatmen found which used very expensive complicated advanced technology. Taken an example cupping therapy method which removing static blood which contains toxins (dirty blood) from the body through the skin. This cupping serves to deal with minor complaints such as colds, dizziness, aches, and also to overcome various health problems, especially cholesterol and high blood pressure. As result,helping peole to cure diseases at affordable costs.
However, alternative medicine has a Harmful risk. The first,it is can lead to death. Some alternative medications have now been widely tested scientifically and proved effective. But most of the drugs used have not been scientifically tested and approved by the local government. And there are some unbelievable alternative medicine in treatment to cause death. The second,it is can requires a long healthying time. it is because alternative therapies generally cannot provide instant healing so they require patience and a longer time to cure compared to conventional treatment.
To conclution, although alternative medicine is good for health, but some of these treatments are harmful to health and have a fatal impact on our health
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- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06274377124 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.9434867888 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290384703101 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742447891082 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132723890332 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19393800535 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213065751882 0.056905535591 374% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.