Currently there is a trend towrds the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Medicine is an essential kind in most society nowadays especially the part of urban life who going to consume natural drugs for health care such as alternative between chemical medicine. Although it is necessary to search factual data about worse effect when it use without recommended by experts or bad side an alchemy drug.
It is being important to drugs consumers now to consume another different way to used natural ingredients for health such as fruits, vegetables or spices for cured from viruses and so on. China, for an example still reverse natural antibiotic to help people who sick and to detoxify poisons from human bodies. So, many modern society believed that natural health care such as bruise, acupuncture, message, is the best choice health system. However, it can be seen so less experts who can handle and have skills for cured people with alternative drug. Afterwards, many results that showed the strength of natural resource is better than another synthetic drug.
In contrary, synthetic drug had a licence and guarantee for people. In hospitals, it can be seen that Doctor always suggested people to eat pills, beside fruits. We can't refuse that hospital regulation had an experts resource and more efficient than other kind of health worker in another places. For example, in United States of America has apply a chemical pharmacy in a large system for hospital to remedies people from viruses. Finally, American people addicted to consume chemical drugs and considered to antibiotic.
To conclude, although the major of citizen in the world choose to go to the hospital, people can't deny that natural drug more save than chemical. So, public should take good care of their bodies and give a better choice to use environment friendly medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...factual data about worse effect when it use without recommended by experts or bad s...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun experts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...alth system. However, it can be seen so less experts who can handle and have skills ...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... people to eat pills, beside fruits. We cant refuse that hospital regulation had an ...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'experts'' or 'expert's'?
Suggestion: experts'; expert's
... refuse that hospital regulation had an experts resource and more efficient than other ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'applied'.
Suggestion: applied
...xample, in United States of America has apply a chemical pharmacy in a large system f...
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Suggestion:
...al drugs and considered to antibiotic. To conclude, although the major of citiz...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, still, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52453624713 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4276274249 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559486247178 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209152868794 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262660010645 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364856299639 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171999125239 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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