Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The discussion about whether or not universities should accept equal numbers of students is very controversial one, there are many good people on both sides of the argument, who have strong feeling.
There are some good reasons that can compel one to go against of the statement. Firstly, All university have a definite seat to admit students whatever the students are male or female. Due their limited numbers of seat they take students with good qualities, if the female students don't have enough qualifications rather than male students then they are forced to admit male students . Another reason is that female students may not be interested as the same subject that are preferable for male students, that is why universities cant not accept equal numbers of students in the same subject.
Now, I shall explain the reason in favour of the topic, with a good judgement, if universities have any how the strict rules to maintain the ratio of boys and girls students then it would be a balancing part of gender equality that can leads the environment very friendly and loveable which would increase the efficiency of students to grasp the topics is complicated.
For the aforementioned reasons there is no doubt that I am against to the statement. I think, though it is necessary to poise and beautify the study environment but it is not possible to maintain always because liking of men and women can't be the same for the subject choices.
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dear sir my first writing
dear sir my first writing contain 246 words, and I have been evaluated by 5.0. if I able to write 250 then is there a chance to increase the score ?
For sure you got more than 5
For sure you got more than 5.0 if the words are more than 250.
I have been said I have
I have been said I have language error but I could not clarify the errors. please could you let me know the errors sentences and portions?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... always because liking of men and women cant be the same for the subject choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69014859698 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8964036681 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27235543872 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113300451208 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110485201778 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147010647869 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103529851163 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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