You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am a II year student of Hansraj college. I read the notice on the board about work-related seminar in another country so I want to write regarding this.As a faculty member of this college you know that I am the topper of the institute.
Also, I want to join that seminar because it will be beneficial for my further life and I am passionate about all these things. Although I can not go to another country myself as the ticket of plain for me like an arm and a leg. if you will allow me to go there than it will be fruitful for you too. As if I will learn something there so I can show those activities to other students too.
you will be grateful if you will tell me the dates of the following program along with the schedule of the seminar so that I can prepare myself for that. Please let me know about accomodation it will be arranged by you oy by them for us. What will be the expenditure of the overall things.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am a II year student of Hansraj colleg...
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Suggestion: As
...untry so I want to write regarding this.As a faculty member of this college you kn...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...untry so I want to write regarding this.As a faculty member of this college you kn...
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... that I am the topper of the institute. Also, I want to join that seminar becaus...
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Suggestion: If
... of plain for me like an arm and a leg. if you will allow me to go there than it w...
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Suggestion: You
...e activities to other students too. you will be grateful if you will tell me th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21739130435 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4304114489 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7147865328 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166848578732 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061510292952 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583057109161 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1222956719 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143868655859 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.