Your student visa is going to expire soon and hence you need to apply for a temporary residency. Write to the immigration officer requesting for this. Describe:
Your current situation.
What type of visa you are applying for.
What you plan to do.
Dear Sir,
With due regards, I would like to state that my name is Imran Hossain and I am currently staying in Australia on a student visa, which is going to expire on 4th August, 2018. My student visa was issued in 2016. Unfortunately, my student visa needs to be curtailed before I can apply for any other visa.
I graduated from my university course with Bachelor of Mechanical Engineering last month and therefore plan on staying in Melbourne for the next few months looking for a job in my field. However, without a temporary or permanent visa, many employers are unwilling to offer me a job. Hence, since I have already completed my studies, I would like to shorten my student visa and apply for a temporary visa under subclass 500, which will allow me to work on a full-time basis in Australia. I have already emailed the visa officer at my university who referred me to you so that you can assist me with this matter.
Therefore, with the facts stated above, I would like to request you to provide me more information on how to proceed with this visa application. I am willing to pay any extra fee necessary or provide any other documents as required by the Australian rules and regulations. I look forward to hearing from you and hope that you will be kind enough to guide me through this complicated situation.
With Regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2018'.
Suggestion: August 2018
...t visa, which is going to expire on 4th August, 2018. My student visa was issued in 2016. Un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64016736402 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67990243628 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6088262292 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283291858507 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107775727286 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680450047691 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195619108661 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360729476854 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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