The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.

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The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.

The flowchart illustrates the various steps that a high school student mist follow to enter university. Once the high school certificate has been obtained, students need to complete an application form for university entrance. This can be downloaded from the university website. The completed application should then be sent to the administration.

Applicants receive a reply about two weeks later, either with a provisional acceptance, a rejection or an acceptance. If a rejection letter is received, students can either cancel their application altogether or complete another application for an alternative course and send to the admission office again.

A provisional acceptance means that more documentation is required. Applicants in this situation should complete the additional documentation and submit them to the office. When an acceptance is received, the applicant should complete the enrolment form and select which subjects he or she wishes to undertake and register with the dean's office. When all this is complete, the applicant may enter university as a fresher.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'deans'' or 'dean's'?
Suggestion: deans'; dean's
...shes to undertake and register with the deans office. When all this is complete, the ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65644171779 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21315467717 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9139837349 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119157804054 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513457036771 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714801416655 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884545557509 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802671493016 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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