Success is the accomplishment of one's own desire and to achieve happiness. Different people have different talents and they all cannot be measured by the same yardstick.
Success means different to different people. Business tycoons want to earn more and more money, politicians work for the welfare of their residents, singers want to rule the world by their voice and scientists want to create breakthroughs improve the world by their research. All professions do not have the same goals and measures for success.
Also, it is important that each individual chooses his own set of goals for himself. Everyone is born with genetically and physically different capabilities. Some are born privileged and some are born with ill luck. A tea-seller goal would be to earn enough money to send his son to a good school whereas a business magnate would target to earn billions of dollars from his new products. However, all of them measure their success by their own goals unless the tea-seller would live a life in utter regret and sorrow.
Just as a poor farmer works in his field during the day spends his evening enjoying and gossiping with his fellow farmers and returns home happy at night. Despite the meagre resources he his contended with his tension-free life. On the other hand, a rich tycoon suffers from depression due to the losses in his business. In this case, the goals that they set for themselves were disparate, so even though the tycoon is still richer, he is much more unhappy.
In contrast to the statement, people, when themselves choose their goals, tend to remain in their comfort zone and only take up tasks that are not challenging enough. They tend to minimize their anxiety. They should push their boundaries outside what life has given to them to achieve true success.
In conclusion, every person should live a life true to themselves and not based on what others expect from them.
- The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors."Over 80 percent of the respondents to a recent survey indicated a desire to reduce their intake of foods containing fats and cholesterol, and today low-fat produc 77
- The following appeared as part of a business plan developed by the manager of the Rialto Movie Theater."Despite its downtown location, the Rialto Movie Theater, a local institution for five decades, must make big changes or close i 25
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta 50
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to addres 50
- Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wit 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... achieve true success. In conclusion, every person should live a life true to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57589234712 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.335085054 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119712566482 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427187903964 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379340712655 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599444849973 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268384002805 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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