Some democrats claim that people who do not take part in voting processes do not have the right to complaint about the situation their communities are in. What is your position regarding this opinion?
It is common for some people who believe in democracy to try to persuade others to vote for a specific party during election times. Sometimes, they even resort to warning people who say do not vote that they will not have the right to complain if the candidate that wins does not satisfy the community. Since this view is an extreme point, the majority of the population will disagree with this view, and in fact, this is not a true definition of democracy.
From my perspective, a person has all the right to complain about what they consider is not going well in their community regardless of their voting history. Sometimes, people decide not to vote because they consider all the available options are of very low quality or all the politicians who took nominations are corrupt; or, what's more, sometimes they decide not to vote because they do not believe in the legitimacy of the democratic process.
On the other have, proponents of the argument would say, that passive participation does not make the best selection of the candidates since these leaders left on their own will make decisions for only a selected group of supporters. Hence, in order to ensure the welfare of the community, a person mush use his/her democratic rights to vote for the least corrupt official and criticize them if they are not making proper decisions. It is only when people force the leaders to think transcendentally, that they will be scrutinized for their actions and make a wise decision.
In conclusion, in my opinion, any person has the right to complain concerning any unjust situation which affects their community, even if they have never participated in a democratic process, because regardless of this, if the person is a citizen, the person has a right to do so, and like everyone they will be affected by the same circumstances as the rest of the members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...s who took nominations are corrupt; or, whats more, sometimes they decide not to vote...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.834375 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74533517705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0006497698 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.888888889 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5555555556 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263540321748 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109296169215 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550525889627 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162914755365 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523825835744 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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