Nowadays, in our community, games which are played by boys are gaining more attentiveness than those played by girls. In my opinion, this one-sided support will lead to plethora of social problems and so it is essential to figure out its grassroots and plug it with suitable solutions.
One significant reason for such less popularity is lack of fascinating elements in girls play. This is because, males normally used to tune their muscles and stamina for showing their best in all games but females may not have such strong focus in their games. For example, in T-20 cricket, During last year International finals, male team scored closer to 350 runs which made the game so captivating to watch till last second. On the other hand, female players scored less than 100 runs in their finals. As a result of such low scores obviously public show less interest in watching girls games.
Getting such poor response from public affects girls sports career severely.This lack of appreciation and support from inhabitants make the players and coaches to demotivate and give up their games over a period of time. As a result if less participation, government and other sports organisation will reduce their annual sports budget for girls which will apparently have a huge impact on the sports infrastructure and facilities meant for women. As a by product of this cumulative issues, girls will stay away from sports and near future it will be only accessible by males alone, this will not only make the ladies to stop the enjoying the sports fun but also it effect their chance of getting into higher studies and government jobs, as the sports quota may not be used effectively by ladies .
In conclusion, In my opinion, lack of interesting elements in ladies games is the primary reason for drawing less popularity from public which certainly effect girls in one or other way.
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- nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by the society compared to women’s sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? 73
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also, apparently, but, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95253164557 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62020378256 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9211155397 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101975329544 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401300766218 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031994732109 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598720100406 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220054252587 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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